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I like the idea of Bandit baking.
It's going to be so hard for Bandit not to eat all of his own products.
Battering Ram, that's what I was thinking of. It was a Super-Duper Battering Ram.
A week of bombardment is enough to drive people insane huh?
What about Great Britain withstanding constant bombing by German Forces for 8 months during the early stages of World War II and that was BEFORE the United States got involved in the war. Great Britain was the last line of defense between Hitler and intercontinental domination and they held their feet in the ground and said "No, we won't stand for it!" and they won.
Siege Weapons are fair, but remember the abbey has been upgraded with metal gates ever since Marek's Super-Duper-Door-Buster (I can't remember of the top of my head what those things are actually called) obliterated the gates during his Invasion.
I like the idea of an Evil Mole tunneling into the abbey.
Quade was absolute proof that not all woodlanders are good people.
Heck, Oak was proof of that too (although he was on Mossflower's side...kinda)
We can have lots of shenanigans happen at the abbey as well, stuff like Ormaz failing at attempts to get into the abbey, people narrowly avoiding capture
And Mergleton's creativity will spice up these shenigans. A rich eccentric fox with boundless resources working with what he brought and what the abbey has?
You're going to love what you get, I guarantee it.
He could work at the Redthorn Tavern once it gets rebuilt, maybe?
it doesn't personally matter to me what choice you make, but I really want Bandit to stay alive. I like Bandit (Even if Marek doesn't
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I thought Benar forgave Marek a long time ago. If he hasn't already, it's my goal to cement that through the act of Marek's sacrifice.
Of course we're going to rebuild the tavern, in fact Marek is going to leave money behind to speed up the process.
The Defenders HQ is also going to get destroyed during the TP, and will be rebuilt but this time inside Ferravale, thus giving both it and Ferravale more security.
I was thinking we could call the new tavern The Redthorn Tavern.
Naming the Belltower? I'm open for suggestions, but I suppose it's Blisa's call.
Of course Marek isn't going to Willowbark alone. He's going to follow the Salamandastron group to the shore and then return with the Willowbark group (Willowbark is one word by the way)
I do like the idea of assassins though, but only one or two. Just for something to do for that particular group in the meantime.
So when can we expect the new champion? Also where did Magramba go?
Injuring John in the tavern works, he could fall into the mine shaft with Marek and wake Marek up. John is going through shock and doesn't respond to his injuries, with Marek's superior sense of direction and memory of being in the shafts before, they manage to get back to Redwall, where they are both treated, and John succumbs to his injuries and is in a coma until you are able to return.
But I would like John to be 100% when you return, no reason to sideline a great character permanently ![]()
I don't want to force someone to kill or sideline their character simply because the TP is going to last longer than they will be around. If you want to have your character fade into the background for a short period of time that would be alright, but I certainly wouldn't want them to die.
The choice is up to you, I suppose. The TP may end as early as the middle of September depending on how things go, but I wont' rush it any further because a few of the events (most notably Marek's Recovery, The Siege and the trip to Willowbark and back) require a certain amount of time to pass in order to be realistic.
I forgot to include the part about freeing the slaves so Ferravale can have Blisa back. Feel free to put that anywhere on the timeline really, particularly after the Black Rose kinda falls apart (temporarily at least, they may be an issue later)
Now that Marek has returned to Ferravale and Ormaz has taken full control of pretty much all organized crime in Mossflower (connections that Marek and Patch have may be mostly untouched) the TP can truly get underway
Here is the initial plan, if edits need to be made because of availability or sudden changes, they will also be posted to this thread.
July 2018 (Basic Outline)
1. Marek has now returned to Ferravale, he meets with Xander, Patch and the Defenders and decides to gather allies by starting a recruitment drive for the Mossflower Defenders. This drive will mostly include NPCs but if someone wishes to create a new character, now is the time to do so. Patch can also provide allies and information through a less....reputable channel
2. Ormaz himself will also gather allies, while The Black Rose and The Shadow provide a good amount support you can never have too small of a horde if you want to take over Mossflower (if Nightbreath has not already done so, this would be a good time to create Ormaz)
3. Beasts will be begin disappearing from Mossflower, though these are mostly unimportant NPCs it will not go unnoticed by the leaders of Mossflower
4. The Ferravale Tower will be fitted with it's bell, although much construction is still needed (think the 1885 Clocktower from Back to the Future Part II where the clock worked but the tower wasn't 100% done yet)
5. On the night of the Tower Celebration, Texo will go missing which will place Ferravale on high alert
6. By the end of July, Ormaz will have captured Blisa (assuming I still have Blisa's permission for this) leaving Marek and Nightbreath in charge and the Siege of Ferravale will begin
August 2018 (Basic Outline)
1. The Siege of Ferravale won't last very long, and Ormaz will quickly overpower Ferravale
2. Knowing that Ormaz will soon attempt to capture Redwall as well, Marek pretends to "negotiate a surrender" and lure a large portion of Ormaz's horde (including his 2nd in command) into the Ferravale Tavern which he will then blow up (anyone getting deja vu from this?). He will tell nobody except Nightbreath about his plan making everyone else assume that Marek has betrayed them to his brother. Ormaz and Nightbreath will not be present at the meeting, instead they will be having a conversation in the Ferravale Jail that is concurrent to the events of the explosion.
3. While he doesn't plan to, Marek will survive the explosion by falling into a forgotten mine shaft that runs underneath Ferravale (the same shaft that once held Quade's Lair) an will make his way to Redwall to recover.
4. Meanwhile, Ormaz will be furious at his losses but still plans to move forward with his takeover of Mossflower, wishing to cause his brother pain even from beyond the grave. When the leaders of the Black Rose and Shadow express their opinions against taking over Redwall (which they believe to be suicide at this point), Ormaz kills them. However, Melanthia manages to escape to connive another day and be a problem later.
5. Marek makes his way to Redwall and recovers. After doing so he plans to travel to gather allies from Willowbark Abbey and Salamandastron, sending a group of Defenders to the mountain and himself taking a journey to Willowbark. Despite protests from the Abbey about the dangers of this trip given the horde threat as well as Marek's questionable condition (particularly by DoraRose) Marek takes the trip anyway and leaves to get allies.
6. Ormaz begins his Siege of Redwall and we can do a bunch of random stuff (fluctuating between silly and serious) like in the 1st Redwall Book. There will be comedy and there will be tragedy
7. By the end of August, the situation is starting to look pretty serious but Ormaz still hasn't managed to get through Redwall and neither side has suffered heavy losses. It's essentially a Stalemate
September 2018 (Basic Outline)
1. The Defenders make their way to Salamandastron and request an audience with the Badger Lord. They are granted a small portion of the Long Patrol to aid Redwall, but are unable to get too large of an number (perhaps setting up for a Salamandastron TP since people have been thinking about that? We'd have to ask the Badger Lord first)
2. Marek makes his way to Willowbark and ask for their support. Although they can provide very few warriors, they grant Marek his request in exchange for aid from Mossflower to help them repair after a heavy storm.
3. Ormaz continues to lay Siege to Redwall and gets closer to his goal. AT this point I suppose the new champion would be in heavy training mode.
4. The two groups of Allies make their way to Mossflower to aid it in it's darkest hour
5. By the end of September, Ormaz has made his way into the abbey and a full-on fight begins, however before he can cause much damage Marek (who finally decides to draw his sword again) arrives with the cavalry and the day is saved.
6. While Ormaz is pretty much defeated, he'll refuse to go out without tormenting his brother as much as possible. He'll kill a few NPC Abbeybeasts and with the help of a few NPC horde members will hold Lilymoore at knifepoint until Marek and DoraRose jump in to save her.
7. In the fight, Marek is mortally wounded but grabs Ormaz and jumps off the Abbey Wall, sacrificing himself to save Redwall and end the tragic story of two brothers once and for all.
8. With Benar's permission, I would like to have Marek buried in Redwall, if that is okay with him.
Great work, but only one issue: Patch is one of a very short list of people that Marek doesn't refer to by a formal title.
The List goes as follows
1. Patch- Marek just calls him Patch
2. Bandit- Marek calls him "Fat One"
3. Ormaz- Marek just calls him "Brother" or occasionally "Ormaz"
I don't know if there has been a female champion in the books, but there has been a female champion in the past on the muck. Violet was female, so I don't see any problem with another one.
I like the traditional idea of a mousemaid, but what some rarely used animal like a Rabbit or a Vole?
Who:
Markalaway-Undertaker of Ferravale
Vojin-Head Guard of Ferravale
Atticus- A visiting Ferravale
Log:
FV:Tavern
Outside a sign swings on a rusty creaking frame above the doorway of the tavern depicting a faded painting of what appears to be three rather rich looking skeletons slumped over a table around a black chalice, perhaps such a thing could be taken as a warning but it doesn't appear to work on the locals. The noise within on a normal day is usually heard before the door is even opened and only rises in volume when one actually steps inside.
There are the typical qualities of a tavern within, from the bar to the chairs and booths and the odd drunk who never seems to move it's the little details which encourage a patron to pay his tab if he likes his fingers. One look at some of the staff or customers might give the impression but the room is decorated to the fiercer tastes with bones, mostly skulls cropping up here and there to fill a gap on a shelf or decorating the walls above the doorways, fireplace and bar, a pair of axes joining the one over the fire with some signs that they've been yanked off to join in a fight a couple of times. Some of the comfier chairs are lined with fur and very rarely one might be found with a few pointed bits of bone to decorate the back. Despite the looks there is entertainment and fun to be had, some form of music usually played on a small stage in the corner and at least one bouncer usually tries to keep the peace while beasts gamble, drink and be merry.
A small door behind the bar leads out the back to the kitchen and cellars while one wall has been opened up in a wide arch to increase the space off into the next room where what seems to be a wooden fence with gates on either end has been set up as a fighting pit as further entertainment and something to bet over.
Markalaway is in his corner of the tavern, sipping his ale quietly, no one sits by the rat as the two tables on either side of him have no beasts at them at all.
"Eh, what mate?" A ferret mutters, his snout buried in a mug of mead, "Whats up now?" He sets down his mug, looking at what his drinking buddies had reacted to - the rather intimidating rat sitting by himself. "Ohhh. Ooooooh." Atticus says, then downs his drink. "Come on now - y'lot can' not really be scared by a rat, can ya?" He ask the tavern at large. "Somebeast get him a drink!" He adds, with a paw pointing to Markalaway.
Markalaway looks over, it's clear no one wants to go near him, as he finishes a drink he has and just watches beasts nearby him.
Atticus lowers his paw, seeing no one going over to the rat. "Oh, come on now, tha's just rude!" The ferret turns back to the bar. "I'll do it myself then! One dri- Two drinks, for me and 'im." He tosses his head back towards Markalaway. After a moment, drinks in paw, Atticus turns back and makes his way over - stumbling a bit, but catching himself as he does it. "Hullo there, mate!" He says, rather jovially, "'Ow are y'this fine day...?"
Markalaway just looks the ferret up and down before he speaks "I...live" He says simple and plain, he looks to the drinks but he did watch them be poured from where he was and knows who poured them so he trusts the drink, its unclear if he trusts the ferret yet or not.
"Well, isn' that great!" Atticus says, laughing, "I suppose we all live, eh mate?" Here he sets one of the mug down, sitting opposite Markalaway as he does so. He pushes the mug towards the rat. "Here - mead, methinks." He takes a long draft of his on mug, nodding. "Aye! Mead! Some o' th' best!" He smiles, looking a bit red in the cheeks. "So, uhh, what d'ya do 'round here? Can' say I know - new to this place, y'know?"
Markalaway says, "Work in the Graveyard......live in the Graveyard" He says as he sniffs the drink, a small taste before he decides it's fine to drink."Markalaway"
"Markalaway, is it?" The ferret says, "Atticus is my own." Tilting his head to one side, Atticus asks, after a moment or so, "So y'uh, y'deal with the dead...?" The question was said in a far quieter tone than anything else the ferret's said today.
Markalaway nods slowly, what it is his main job and just his looks may be why fear go near him.
Atticus says, "I see..." He laughs again- though it seems nervous now. "Saying y'live is bit funnier now, eh?" He downs his mead, slamming the mug on the table. "Bit morbid, aye, but, uh, funny..."
Markalaway just sips his ale and doesn't speak for a long while, it's clear he doesn't talk very much "Some...beast has to"He says in a deep voice.
Atticus smiles again - but like the laugh, there is a tinge of nervousness to it. "Of course! An' thank y'for it!" He looks around the room, seeing all the other beasts still giving the table a wide berth. "Suppose y'have any hobbies or anything like, mate?" He asks. The ferret seems like he is genuinely trying to be cordial - or at least pleasant to the undertaker.
Markalaway says, "Keep Graveyard...safe and in order."He sips his ale " When needed....keep friends ...safe"
Swallowing, Atticus nods. "Suppose the' counts." A pause. "I guess y'could I've had the same hobby of-" he gestures vaguely with his right paw, "Keeping friends safe, y'know?"
Vojin walks into the tavern, first seeing who is here, speaking with a couple guards and then getting some water as he is still on duty after all.
Markalaway nods, he looks over at Vojin as he enters and then drinks some ale.
Atticus looks as well, but waves to the wildcat. "Hullo there!" He calls, "Why n'grab a drink an' join m'an' this here Markalaway, mate?" Both ferret and rat are still alone in the corner. "Y' happen to know him?" Atticus asks Markalway with a small nod to Vojin, "Because, I uh, don'..."
Vojin walks over and simplely nods to the rat and studies the Ferret "Your new to town. I am Vojin, Head Guard here at Ferravle and you are?" He will wait on a reply and stay standing by the table.
Markalaway frowns as more beasts walk over and sips the last little bit of his Mead quietly, he knows who beasts in town are and it seems the wildcat saved him the trouble of saying a name, to which he seems glad of.
"Atticus! Pleased to meet y'!" The ferret responds to the head guard, still sitting but facing the wildcat. "I am new! Jus' was telling m'mate Markalaway here that." He smiles. "Head guard, eh? Used to guard a traveling..." He pauses, seeming to rethink what he was about to say. "...Merchant, myself!" Another smile.
Vojin arches an eyebrow "Do not give me reason to distrust you sir. I do take making sure the town is safe and...well no power hungry beasts around anyways, a fight here and there happens and expected at times in a vermin village. But some beasts....say slavers are surely kicked out, politely at first of course"
Markalaway just listens, he keeps to himself most of the time but he will help defend the town again takeovers if they ever happen.
Atticus swallows again. "Well...I, uh..." He plays with his empty mug for a bit, then, finally, he looks right at the wildcat. "Good thing I accidentally - well, kind of m'fault - got th' slaver I worked for killed!" He looks down, shifting in his seat. "I jus' was hired t'protect him in some towns - loved betting a bit t'much and had a lo' of debt, y'know?" The ferret gives another nervous smile, accompanied by a shrug. "Really bad a t paying debts back - an', well, y'know..." He laughs, but again it is nervous.
Vojin narrows his eyes "It may be wise to find a better job then, no body guards to slavers...or anyone who works for one as slavers are one thing frowned upon here"
Markalaway just stays quiet, but he is listening even if it doesn't look like it. He also knows what the ferret looks like in case its needed to know later. He slowly stands to get some ale, a few beasts give him a very good clear path.
"Good thing I was jus' looking fo' a job, eh?" Atticus' voice is at a distinctly higher pitch than normal, and it's clear he regrets ever opening his mouth. "Sorry t'say I'd make a poor guard for here -"
He decides finally to just settle with staring at his empty mug and not look at any beast, "- Got m' las employer killed! A, uh, season ago! An' he was the' slaver. He got in debt too! But to th', uh, wrong beasts, y'know!" The ferret clearly does not want to be in the conversation any more.
Vojin says, "Well....I be careful where you say Slaver at and there is jobs open, you may have to ask the chieftain or the tavern owner maybe."
Markalaway soon returns with some ale and sits down quietly, he looks up at the door once or twice
Atticus exclaims, "Right! Noted!" The ferret looks up as the rat sits back down, then turns towards Vojin once again. "You're th' one who said th' word first, mate - An' I'm done with all that, y'know? Bunch of cut-throat thief, them lot of slavers are!"
Vojin nods "Yes...there may be a group around, lets hope your not a friend to them then, as for jobs...there is guards, tavern workers, maybe a healer...could always use a shop keeper or two. May be other jobs I don't know bout...those Mossflower Defenders are looking for beasts ta join, but I am not in charge of them, and their base is outside town, not in here and they for sure do not like slavers"
Markalaway stands "I...need to check on someone....they were to report back and have not yet, Knowing Patch.....he is not doing what he was told" He then walks out without another word, and yes he gets a very wide clear path to the door and once he is gone the tavern is a lot less tense and on edge.
"Y'know, I'd like t'avoid fights now." Atticus seems to have calmed a bit as he says it. "An', uh, bye, Markalaway!" He waves as the undertaker leaves. Glancing at Vojin once again, he asks, "Say, do y'find him as, well, /creepy/ as every one else seems to...?" It's clear his trying to change the subject.
Vojin sits and at first is just quiet till finally " Yes he does...creep beasts out. But he is...mostly harmless"
Markalway meanwhile heads back to his hut....at the end of the path on the other side of the graveyard that one has no choice, they have to go through it to even get to his hut.
First 3 logs here.....This OOCLY was role played out over past 3-4 weeks BUT ICLY happen on on May 4th 2018...day after The Redwall Spring Feast that happen on May 3nd 2018...
Log 1. From the Dust Part 1: A Storm Approaches
http://forum.rwmuck.org/viewtopic.php?id=679
Log 2 From The Dust Part 2: Ghosts of the Past
http://forum.rwmuck.org/viewtopic.php?id=682
Log 3 From the Dust Part 3: The Board is Set
http://forum.rwmuck.org/viewtopic.php?id=695
There...now some REAL ACTION can ...The past 3-4 weeks Ormaz has been...quiet...planing his next move on the board! And that surely can NOT be good.
Stay tuned for more
Fate of Marek TP
***For review read these two logs first as all 3 happen the same day, a day after the Redwall Spring Feast that Happen on May 3nd 2018 ****
http://forum.rwmuck.org/viewtopic.php?id=679
http://forum.rwmuck.org/viewtopic.php?id=682
Log:
DoraRose scowls deeply. "It's almost always time for tea, unless there's a battle..." facing a different direction than the other creatures, she spots the newcomer mere seconds before the Seer does. Her blue eyes narrow dangerously. Brother? She shakes her head slightly and stands, the muscles of her right arm buldging noticibly under her tight sleeves as she lifts Nightsong off of the counter.
Stepping around the tavern owner, she glares up into the new stoat's face, easing into an at-ready position with grace and subtlety. She is defiant, and free from fear. "Yeah, and she's also very dear to me. I would suggest that you remember THAT for later, too." If he can do subtle threats, then she can, too, so there! "Now who are you? Where did you come from?" (She means in the tavern specifically, but any honest and not-snarky answer will do just fine.) "And what do you want?
He just got threatened by a mouse. He can deal with it.
In an instant, Marek's nervous tone vanishes, and he only calms down, simply pulling up a chair for his brother and sitting down at the opposite side of the table, smirking for a moment before his face turns much more serious. "Mr. Nightbreath, Ms. DoraRose, Patch...you may stay. Everyone else, please leave my tavern immediatly". Knowing how dangerous Marek can be, every beast complies though some take longer than others ("I said NOW!") and then Marek turns to face his brother "Ormaz. It truly has been a long time. Tell me, how did you survive our little fight after those Mossflower beasts helped me escape from The Black Rose. I doubt very much that Quickclaw would have taken the time to interfere on your behalf, and the last I remembered a sizable building had collapsed on top of you. I would be surprised if I hadn't had my fair share of brushes with death in the past myself. But I am curious". He gestures towards Patch. "Bring me another ale, Patch. And one for Ormaz, this ought to be an interesting tale". He eyes his brother with a mix of respect and hatred as he waits patiently for a reponse.
Patch blinks "Youhave a broher? Since when do ya have a brother boss man?Shouldnt I of been told this?". Marek glares at the rat and he decides to stay quiet. Patch just crosses his arms and sits quietly, listening and keeping his mouth shut, which is hard to do for him but he manages...barely.
Nightbreath growls in the back of his throat, considering killing Ormaz here and now. He decides against it however, as he's not sure what the cost will be even if he's successful. Even though it irks him, he decides ultimately to follow Marek's lead on this.
"Oh, that," Ormaz says, flicking a paw in an airy gesture while completely ignoring DoraRose. "I dug my way out using a dagger, tunneling under the rubble that had nearly crushed me to death..." His eyes gleam in the dim light. "When I finally finished digging my way out, you were gone. And so was everybeast else."
DoraRose does not sit. It's, like, the farthest thing from her mind right now 'cause she's being COMPLETELY IGNORED BY THE BEAST SHE JUST THREATENED. Not cool, man. Not cool at ALL. "Uh, hello," She says, forcing herself to not lose control. Disrespect is no reason to do something stupid. "You do realize not answering questions is, like, super rude, right? At least I now have your name, /Ormaz/. Do you bake cookies for a living or something?" She's ticked off, yo, and when she's ticked off by an enemy, all the snotty snark has the potential to be released!
Marek calmly listens to Ormaz's story. "So why show yourself now? Surely you've kept tabs on me" When DoraRose interrupts he holds up a paw. "The situation is quite sensitive, Ms. DoraRose. Kindly hold your violent outbursts until such time as a conflict actually arises. There is no beast in Mossflower who wants my brother dead more than I, but if he were afraid of death he would not have come here" He smiles once again. "No, you have precautions in place don't you, brother? You know exactly what's going to happen and when it's going to happen. The best I can do is wait until it's my move".
Nightbreath clenches a paw, hidden in the sleeve of his robe. It's rare that a Seer feels powerless, but this is one of those moments--there're too many unknown factors for him to interfere. Too many threads aligning at once...
Ormaz glances to DoraRose as if seeing her for the first time. He raises an eyebrow, saying nothing. He nods politely however at Marek's declaration of wanting him dead, giving an even half-smile as if he were discussing a vaguely interesting topic with a talkative merchant on a lazy summer afternoon. "Aye. The board is set....the pieces move, but faster than you think."
DoraRose literally stutters for a few seconds. "But he's ignoring me! And I'm not being violent! If I was being violent I would've chopped his leg off by now and kneed him in the groin for laughs!" Seriously. She fights dirty when angry. "How is this violent? URGH." She leans against the table, scowling deeply. She /hates/ not being allowed to be snarky. So she probably will again if given the opportunity. "Also, I hate chess. Bleck. Why do beasts insist on using that flipping analogy all the time?" she asks nobody in particular. SHE WILL NOT BE SILENT. NO ONE CAN MAKE HER.
Marek nods. "Indeed, we shall see how this goes". He takes a long drink from his ale. "Will you indulge us by telling me why you took so long to make your apperance, or shall I have to figure that out on my own. No doubt it was you who ordered beasts to poison me, in Redwall no less. A bold move. And the beasts that attacked Ms. Angela and I when I returned to Mossflower several months ago?. This is quite the long game you've played brother, but why wait so long to make your first moves?"
Nightbreath watches the tension at play between the two brothers. He maintains an almost emotionless expression, even though his soul is burning with the instinctual desire to take out Ormaz. He's starting to see, as the two stoats verbally duel, just how things might get in the future.
Ormaz glares at DoraRose during her outburst, and for a moment, cracks appear in the apparently calm exterior he's presenting. A hint of raw, cruel, animalistic fury flashes across his face, and then, like the fading shadow of a cloud passing over a field, it's gone. He returns his attention to Marek, perfectly composed and civil...or so it seems. "Let's just say I like to be certain of my work."
DoraRose raises an eyebrow at the stoat's slight cracking. She looks defiantly into his eyes until he looks away, then (probably much to the tavern owner's relief) stays quiet and listens. She still would like an answer to how she was being violent earlier, but that can wait until this is over. She goes behind the bar, gets some tea, returns, pulls out a chair, and sits, resting her axe on her lap and sipping her drink. See, it's almost always time for tea! ![]()
Marek puts down his drink and signals for Patch to take it atway. "A wise strategy, I suppose I'll say have to wait and see what will come of it". He simply walks back to the bar. "I'll be watching, little brother. With great interest"
"Indeed...brother," Ormaz says with a slightly mocking smirk on his face. "And I shall come from wherever you aren't looking, naturally," he adds in a low voice. "Speaking of which..." He extends a paw suddenly, and tosses something towards the cluster of lanterns and candles haphazardly arranged around the middle of the room, which up to now had done little to fight back the onset of night outside. Then, without warning, the flames flare up, white hot, bright enough to temporarily blind anybeast whose eyes were open. This includes Nightbreath, who despite being unable to see in the immediate aftermath of the flare-up, manages to vault over the bar towards where Ormaz had been, reaching out with his paws poised to pin down...nothing. Ormaz is long gone by the time he rubs the searing afterimages from his own eyes--the stoat planned his exit well.
"GAH!" Dora's left paw, which had just set her tea on the table, jerks up to cover her eyes as she stands, raising her axe with her right. As her vision clears she starts muttering under her breath. Because of course the enemy got away successfully. Turning, she glares balefully at the tavern owner. "That maniac is as dangerous as Stormfeather. I'm going to go check on my daughter, Marek, and then you and I....we're going to have a /chat/, and you had /better/give me some answers. Now if you'll excuse me," she grumbles as she storms out. She now doesn't want to leave her daughter without her protection outside the Abbey, not with some lunatic running around loose. The world has suddenly gotten a whole lot more dangerous, and the Warrior doesn't like it. Not one little bit...
Marek is momentarily shellshocked by the explosion of light, when everything settles Ormaz is gone and DoraRose leaves quickly thereafter leaving only Marek, Nightbreath and Patch in the eerily silent tavern. "So, my brother has returned. Well, if I it's a game of chess he wants, it's a game of chess he shall get". Turning to Nightbreath he says nothing for a brief moment and then smiles coldly. "And all of my pieces are queens"
Who:
Marek- Owner of Ferravale Tavern and is Ferravale Ambassador
Nightbreath- Seer of Ferravale
Patch-Spy and Tavern Worker
Dorarose-Redwall Abbey Gatekeeper
Lilymoore- Bell ringer Redwall Abbey
Blisa-Chieftsin Ferravale
Blisa's Guards
Assorted spoofed tavern beasts and...
The shadowy cloaked figure yet to be named...
Log:
FV:Tavern
Outside a sign swings on a rusty creaking frame above the doorway of the tavern depicting a faded painting of what appears to be three rather rich looking skeletons slumped over a table around a black chalice, perhaps such a thing could be taken as a warning but it doesn't appear to work on the locals. The noise within on a normal day is usually heard before the door is even opened and only rises in volume when one actually steps inside.
There are the typical qualities of a tavern within, from the bar to the chairs and booths and the odd drunk who never seems to move it's the little details which encourage a patron to pay his tab if he likes his fingers. One look at some of the staff or customers might give the impression but the room is decorated to the fiercer tastes with bones, mostly skulls cropping up here and there to fill a gap on a shelf or decorating the walls above the doorways, fireplace and bar, a pair of axes joining the one over the fire with some signs that they've been yanked off to join in a fight a couple of times. Some of the comfier chairs are lined with fur and very rarely one might be found with a few pointed bits of bone to decorate the back. Despite the looks there is entertainment and fun to be had, some form of music usually played on a small stage in the corner and at least one bouncer usually tries to keep the peace while beasts gamble, drink and be merry.
A small door behind the bar leads out the back to the kitchen and cellars while one wall has been opened up in a wide arch to increase the space off into the next room where what seems to be a wooden fence with gates on either end has been set up as a fighting pit as further entertainment and something to bet over.
Marek stands on the other side of the counter very uneasy, something is not right but he isn't sure what it is. "Remember, Mr. Patch. Be ready for combat if necessary. We cannot allow our guest to be harmed by whatever has made it's presence felt here"
The door to the tavern opens, and the way a ray of sunshine breaks through dark storm clouds does LilyMoore Louise enter the tavern, oblivious to the darkness that the adults already here have felt. "Marek? Oh, there you are!" She waves and runs over to the counter, a smile wreathing her face. She has her arms open slightly, inviting him to get a hug.
Right behind her enters her mother, DoraRose Strongheart, who is wearing her black traveling outfit, sword buckled at her side, axe in paw. "Lily, please wait for me, not every beast here is exactly approving of woodlanders." Noting the stoat's tense body language, the mouse slips into a more alert stance herself, glancing casually around the tavern.
Blisa, Ferdinand, and Valerie enter right behind the Warrior mouse, but they wait by the door. The Warrior comes up and places her paw on her daughter's shoulder and adds, "Remember how I said I needed to have a little talk with Marek while you draw with Blisa?" "Yeah, Momma, I just wanted to say hi real quick."
Patch nods as he is beside Marek, he is on alert and looks over where that shadowy figure was last seen. For once he isn't acting all annoying like he does sometimes, he does have his serious moments sometimes.
Nightbreath nods quickly to DoraRose, then to Blisa. He casually stands, and moves to a position where he can quickly intercept any threat from the ominously dark corner before it would be able to reach Blisa. He seems relaxed at first glance, but the fire in his eyes betrays his tension.
Marek move closer to Nightbreath, noticing the entrance of DoraRose's group he quickly gestures for them to approach the counter, not saying a word but letting the actions of Nightbreath and Patch speak for him.
DoraRose reads the body language of the others, as do Blisa's bodyguards, and as Ferdinand lays a paw on his sabre hilt, the mouse says lightly, "Hey, Lily, could you please make sure Basil knows I'm coming so he'll know to behave?" Lily, looking slightly confused, nods and goes to give the stoat a hug. "Yeah, sure, Momma."
The Chieftain, having also caught onto the tension and sense of danger, smiles at her inexperienced friend and says, "Hey, Marek, feel free to come by my house tomorrow. Lily and her mom are staying for a few days, so you guys should hang out." The young mouse, looking slightly afraid now, backs up, waves at her stoat friend, and hurries back over to the cat's side.
Valerie puts her arms around the shoulders of the mouse and the feline, and they head out the door. Ferdinand locks gazes with the Seer, letting him know that he knows there's something really bad about to happen. Then he, too, leaves.
When they're gone, Dora fixes the stoat with a hard gaze. "Okay, what's going on? I don't like shooing my children off like that, but you guys are acting so tense....what's up?"
Patch usually would make some smart mouth reply but he just stays on high alert, he isn't sure what is going on but he is not acting like himself.
Nightbreath's eyes flick quickly to the corner, as he murmurs to the Warrior mouse: "Something is here. We're still working out what it is. Something from the past. Something dangerous."
Marek nods, but still seems to say nothing. After several minutes, Marek finally says only one word. "Familiar..."
DoraRose glares at the ermine. "Oh, yeah, that's /super/ clear and helpful.....familiar? Oh, cheese...." The Warrior rolls her eyes and sighs, setting her axe down on the counter. "Seriously, can't y'all just give me a straight answer...." She hates feeling like she is in the dark about something, okay? The rat not acting like himself is what she finds the most helpful. When he's not being snarky and annoying, you know it's dangerous. Or sad. Or something.
"Just like old times, then," Nightbreath mutters at DoraRose's reaction. "I would give you a straight answer if I could. We just haven't figured out the details yet...You know how vague prophecy can be at times..."
Marek still is not saying a word, but seems to be growing more and more uneasy as time passes, he slams his paw onto the counter and looks around, trying to ascertain the location of the mysterious figure. "Familiar"
DoraRose makes an irritated sound. "Yeah, but is it an enemy, a creature? UNGH, you drive me insane...." she sits down on a stool and scowls. "/What/ is familiar, Marek? Blargh, I need some tea....and something to eat...." Just because there's badger doesn't mean you can't have food, especially when the beasts you're needing to fight beside you are being irritating.
Patch tries to find the figure...wait is that him?..Nope that's just some fox who clearly had too much ale and he is leaving anyways. Then he thinks he sees movement but frowns as its hard to tell as he looks ready to grab his dagger but at the same time he doesnt want to look like he wants to flick a dagger either. He motions to an area where the figure may of moved...moving can not be good if they did move. The rat then frowns "Tea at a time like this lady?"
Nightbreath growls in frustration as the crowd moves again, blocking the corner from his line of sight once more. It's empty when he can next see it. On instinct, he whirls, drawing out his dagger, only to find that his intended target has already passed. His eyes flick rapidly from point to point wildly as he tries to get a fix on just where the enemy is. If he can see it, he can kill it--
Marek finally begins speaking. "Now is not the time for tea, Ms. DoraRose. Our conversation will have to wait, I believe the beast that lurks in the darkness may be someone I know, but beyond that...I am unsure"
Nightbreath fails to find the mysterious entity until it's too late--from behind Marek comes a mocking voice. "Hello there, _brother._ I see the little woodlander that just left is dear to you...I will remember that for later. But enough about me," the voice says airily, the speaker stepping into the open and casting off his hood, revealing a stoat with features eerily similar to Marek's own. He laughs coldly. "It's been a while, hasn't it...brother."
Marek: David Warner as Jon Irenicus from Baldur's Gate II: Shadows of Amn
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hk0sOGVSAP4
Whom:
Marek-Ferravale Tavern Owner and Ferravale Ambassador
Patch-Spy,Tavern Worker. Annoying rat
Nightbreath-Seer of ferravale
Shadowy Figure-Unknown
Spoofed tavern beasts
FV:Tavern
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Outside a sign swings on a rusty creaking frame above the doorway of the tavern depicting a faded painting of what appears to be three rather rich looking skeletons slumped over a table around a black chalice, perhaps such a thing could be taken as a warning but it doesn't appear to work on the locals. The noise within on a normal day is usually heard before the door is even opened and only rises in volume when one actually steps inside.
There are the typical qualities of a tavern within, from the bar to the chairs and booths and the odd drunk who never seems to move it's the little details which encourage a patron to pay his tab if he likes his fingers. One look at some of the staff or customers might give the impression but the room is decorated to the fiercer tastes with bones, mostly skulls cropping up here and there to fill a gap on a shelf or decorating the walls above the doorways, fireplace and bar, a pair of axes joining the one over the fire with some signs that they've been yanked off to join in a fight a couple of times. Some of the comfier chairs are lined with fur and very rarely one might be found with a few pointed bits of bone to decorate the back. Despite the looks there is entertainment and fun to be had, some form of music usually played on a small stage in the corner and at least one bouncer usually tries to keep the peace while beasts gamble, drink and be merry.
A small door behind the bar leads out the back to the kitchen and cellars while one wall has been opened up in a wide arch to increase the space off into the next room where what seems to be a wooden fence with gates on either end has been set up as a fighting pit as further entertainment and something to bet over.
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It's a normal day at the Ferravale Tavern, vermin are drinking to their hearts content, a group of weasels are playing some sort of card game with Patch, a pair of foxes are dueling in the fighting pit and Marek is behind the counter washing dishes. Nothing seems out of the ordinary, but every day starts off like this, even the days that are hiding something truly sinister.
At the end of the counter sits NighTbreath. The Seer sips water and murmurs to himself as he rolls a pair of strange, symbol-etched dice, carved from some creature's bones, again and again.
Marek continues washing dishes behind the counter, a sponge attached to the new bronze brace at the end of his paw. This brace is clearly new as it still shines with the luster of something freshly forged. He notices Nightbreath and removes the sponge attachment before walking over to Nightbreath, placing his bronze paw on the counter. "Mr. Nightbreath, it is not often I see you here. To what do we owe this unexpected visit?" He gestures to Patch to take over his cleaning duties which leaves the weasels in the rogue's game quite pleased with the result. "Patch, you shall take over from here. I have a feeling that Mr. Nightbreath's presence is something that requires my immediate attention".
The gleam of metal draws Nightbreath's gaze from the dice over to Marek's newly forged paw. "Ah. Marek. At first I thought I was coming here to get a breath of..." He wrinkles his nose, realizing that 'fresh' isn't the right term for the air in the tavern. "...different air. But then I found, as ever, the stars have guided me here for a reason. Just what that reason is..." He gestures to the dice. "Well, l'm figuring that out. But fate is heavy in the wind today. Something approaches."
Marek raises an eyebrow. "I see" Rubbing his chin with his good paw, Marek decides it best to sit down. "I have known you long enough to know that your predictions have a habit of coming true, Mr. Nightbreath. If it is a storm you suggest than it is a storm we shall get. I only hope that we can figure out the details before this storm engulfs us further".
Patch listens carefully as he begins washing dishes. After all, information is his trade and if the future of Mossflower is at stake he could use that to his advantage.
Nightbreath nods slowly. He glances again to Marek's metal paw, but declines to comment for the moment. "So far, I have managed to figure out this much: It will come from where none expect it, and it will shake Mossflower to its roots." His eyes seem to go out of focus for a moment. "A shadow returns from where it was thought buried long ago. It rises from the dust even now, paws outstretched to grasp the future and force its will upon our world. This cannot come to pass. We must defy it..." His eyes clear again and he finishes in a whisper. "Or we are all lost."
Marek nods, appearing visibly shaken by Nightbreath's words. "That is very troublesome, Mr. Nightbreath. Mossflower has many enemies that could return for vengeance and any number of them could cause serious damage. I shall have to inform Mr. Xander to being recruiting more numbers. Mossflower allies have somewhat dwindled in number over the past few seasons and the Long Patrol may be too far away to be of immediate help". He pours both him and Nightbreath a drink.
Patch listens best he can and almost drops a mug, he juggles it and sighs in relief, that was close and then he is back to washing dishes.
Nightbreath seizes his glass firmly and holds it up for a moment, clinking it against Marek's. "Against death," He intones, and drinks deeply. "It's a troublesome spot in which we find ourselves, Marek. Peace has returned, but there is an undercurrent of tension. We find ourselves with few friends, as you say. We'll need every blade we can get if what I have foreseen indeed comes to pass."
Marek nods firmly as he drinks. "Against Death" He looks down in thought. "I dread the wording of your visions, Mr. Nightbreath. While I don't have your spiritual connections, I've had a strange feeling myself. I-I've never told you this, Mr. Nightbreath but..." He sighs and he cuts himself off. "Ms. DoraRose will be arriving soon to have a discussion with me that I have been meaning to have. My own past has weighed on me greatly, Mr. Nightbreath. Perhaps it would be wise for you to also remain for this conversation. I have secrets that....secrets that must no longer remain in the darkness, and if It was my past that would come to haunt me then I truly fear what my come to pass"
"Aye. I will do as you ask." The Seer locks eyes with Marek, attempting to look reassuring. "Take heart. Sometimes visions can prove false. Sometimes the hourglass turns and things do not come to pass. But it's best to be ready. Because when such things _do_ emerge from the darkness, it will take great power to even attempt to banish them once more."
Marek listens intently to Nightbreath before returning to his drink. "Sage advice, Mr. Nightbreath. Advice that I will take to heart" He finishes his drink in abnormally quick fashion before looking towards the strange dice in Nightbreath's possession. "We shall wait for Ms. DoraRose to arrive, in the meantime perhaps you could explain these peculiar dice to me. They seem rather interesting"
"They're crude things really," Nightbreath says, running a paw over the etched designs in one. "Rudimentary tools to aid a Seer in their craft. The symbols etched in each of the ten faces of each die can have various meanings depending on the interpreter's intent." He smiles slightly. "They also are useful as a focusing tool during meditation."
Patch finishes doing dishes and starts to put them away, he sighs when he has to get a rather drunk weasel another ale, but hey more coins and he is honest and places them where they are supposed to go.
Marek nods. "I see, yes focus is important to the art of mediation. It helps those who seek to find inner peace after losing their own, I pain I know far too greatly". Reattaching the sponge to his bronze paw he begins cleaning the counter, glaring at a vole who managed to break her plate of food at the other end of the counter, Marek takes cleaning very seriously.
Nightbreath smiles in agreement. "Focus is critical. But also a _lack_ of focus on any particular thing. One must simply _be_, and drown out all distractions, while not chasing any particular thought. That's what the dice are for--a focal point to return to if any thought drifts across and threatens to break the trance."
Before Nightbreath says anything else, he tenses. He reaches carefully to his side with one paw, under the counter, gripping a dagger held there. "Something is here. Something comes. I can't see which one it is..." He murmurs under his breath. A shadowy figure across the tavern locks eyes with Marek briefly from under his hood. Then the huddle of tavern goers shifts, obscuring the stranger from sight. "Be on guard, Marek," Nightbreath whispers. "It is close."
Patch watches the hooded figure, ok what is with the shadowy look as he frowns and mutters and the rat edges closer to Marek "I have no clue who that is and already dislike em'"
Marek suddenly seems to go cold and still when he hearts Nightbreath's words. While the figures escapes his vision, Marek's eyes betray a fear he has not felt in a very long time. "Th-that's Impossible. It couldn't be...?" He turns towards Patch. "Mr. Patch, we have a guest arriving shortly, if you have a weapon at hand please have it ready. Whatever approaches cannot be allowed to be allowed to harm Mrs. DoraRose"
Nightbreath's eyes gleam in the dim light of the tavern, and he tightens his grip on the hidden dagger--the blade that once took the life of a slaver badger not far from here. He seems, for once, paralyzed by indecision. /This is a crossroads of beginnings and endings. We could cut the thread here, and avert what is to come. But it is too soon to tell...there is nothing to do but watch./ He clenches his jaw visibly, and removes his paw from the dagger's hilt. He can draw it swiftly if need be, but for now, he thinks, it would be better not to show his intentions too soon. He murmurs to himself. "I shall be as the thunderbolt from clear skies. Unseen, unexpected, and devastating."
**Redwall Abbey Graveyard **
whom:
Marek- Ambassador of Ferravale and Ferravale Tavern Owner
Dorarose- Gatekeeper of Redwall
Log:
Marek sits quietly in the abbey graveyard in a mixture of meditation and solemn silence. Before him is a small gravestone, well kept and well remembered. It reads ==Here lies Maxtor, adopted son of Oz==. For a moment he says nothing but looks down in regret, after some time he finally places a paw on the stone. "So here we are again, young mouse. Your family did so much for me and yet I spat on their kindness by cutting an innocent life short". He frowns as he stands, turning to look around the graveyard proper. "So many souls are this place because of me...." He stops mid-sentence and simply stands to leave. "Perhaps another time, child. This place is a burden I can only bear for a short time"
The breeze gently rustles the leaves that are starting to sprout on the trees as a mouse comes into the graveyard. It's the Gatekeeper, DoraRose. She's wearing a yellow dress and carrying a basket under her arm. She is watching where she walks for the most part, but now she glances up and spots the stoat. "Oh, Marek," She says softly, smiling. "So this is where you went. Lily was asking. She's busy with some chores right now." She heads to a grave, whose headstone says ==Leon==. Pulling a bundle of flowers from her basket, she kneels and starts tying the flowers to the headstone with some twine.
Marek notices the intrusion of DoraRose having entered the same section of the graveyard as himself. "Hello, Ms. Dorarose. Yes, I feel it necessary to visit this place when I come to the abbey. It is the closest thing to penance I can find. This place holds ally, friend, foe and vict-" He frowns slightly. "And the innocent. I came to this place with malice on two occasions and put so many beasts to the sword. And yet this place is also home to old friends who died better beasts than I can hope to be". He gestures towards a few stones nearby. "Take Mr. Leon for example, and Mr. Zork. I saw them from the eyes of both a hated foe and a treasured friend. It is to these two that I owe the ability to stand here pondering my past and pondering my future". He sighs. "This place holds more than just heroes, it holds a constant reminder of my past, Ms. DoraRose. I have a connection be it friend or foe to more beasts in this place then I wish to admit. I have lived a very long and very tragic life, Ms. DoraRose. How does a beast carry so much death on his shoulders? How do I carry so much weight and find the strength to go on? And yet here I am, as penance Penance for the countless crimes I want to forget but can't, Penance for not being there to save those that mattered. Your husband was a hero, Ms. DoraRose. But what am I?" He places a paw on the stone once again. "What am I but a beast lost in the shadow of his past hoping to find his place. I'm still looking Ms. DoraRose. I'm looking but I haven't found it. Or perhaps it hasn't found me? For now all I can do is keep looking for the answer"
DoraRose has finished tying the knot and rocks back on her heels. "Every beast makes mistakes, Marek,"
She says quietly, gaze fixed upon the place where her husband lies. "Lily adores you. You're one of her best friends. And while I have been more than hesitant to accept that, I do now. You have earned trust, at least from some. Perhaps the strength you need isn't to come to you from within, but rather from without.....from your friends." She sits on the grass, crosses her legs, and pulls a knitting project out of her basket. Her sleeves are long and loose. To beasts who don't know her very well, she looks just like any regular mouse wife. Hardly the Warrior she truly is. Her needles click together gently as she begins to work on the row she's on.
Marek sighs. "Perhaps you a right. But my past is a lot to answer for. Perhaps one day I will tell you more, but for now I'll simply ask about things more recent" The entire time he has not taken his paw off of Maxtor's stone. "This young mouse had potential, from what I have heard. He was a great warrior with a unique fighting style. He was as brilliant with a quarterstaff as any beast was with a sword and when your abbey was under threat by the likes of Bloodclaw he stood up along with so many others in this place, even with the likes of Mr. Flicktail and Mr. Oak to stop the menace. He overcame a paw damaged from a fire that consumed his village, he overcame harsh weather to journey to Redwall and had Mr. Oz not followed him, who knows what great evil might have befallen this land? He had so much in store for him, he only wanted to see his foster father and I cut his life short with a crossbow. His family has done so much for me in the pas- that is to say that they've done so much for me since I turned awayfrom that darkness and Mr. Oz has even forgiven my transgression. But I can't find it easy to forgive myself, Ms. DoraRose for the grief I have caused the Winters Family in particular. That is just a small portion of my past, Ms. DoraRose for the rest would take far too much time than we have to discuss. In the end, I can only hope the good outweighs the wrongs I have done"
DoraRose glances at the stoat, then pauses in her knitting long enough to pat the ground beside her. "Sit down, Marek." She continues to work on her project, obviously expecting the stoat to obey. She stitches for a while in silence before she speaks. "Why can you not forgive Oz's forgiveness? Can you accept mine?" She's gonna get to the root of the issue, so there!
Marek bows his head. "Perhaps, Ms. DoraRose. I am unsure" he gathers his things to exit the graveyard and return to Ferravale. "This is not the place to discuss my past, Ms. DoraRose. If you have the time please come see me at the tavern. It's time I told some beast about my past, and perhaps you the one that it is best to do so with". Silently Marek leaves the graveyard leaving a single mint leaf on Leon's stone but saying nothing else, clearly his past pains him and he wishes to say more but feels it must be in the less solemn place.
"Alright, Marek. When you're ready." DoraRose watches him lay down the mint leaf, then listens to him go. She sighs. She hadn't been planning on leaving Redwall for a while, but now he piqued her curiosity. She feels REQUIRED to go now, y'know? She lifts the mint leaf, sniffs it, then tucks it into the twine she tied her flowers onto the headstone with. After putting her knitting back into the basket, she stands, groaning slightly. "I'm getting too old to do that," she mutters, then picks up the basket and goes to find her daughter. Maybe the 2 of them can make a day trip of it.....maybe even escort Blisa back to the village. Yeah. That sounds like a good plan....
Yes, the Muck is fine though you haven't for a very long time been able to use the main website to actually log on to the muck. I use The Mud Connector, others use 3rd party TELNET connections.
Also if you want to get responded to quicker, try posting in RP Chat
I felt like it would be good to do a little worldbuilding. I made this Facebook Profile for Marek based on how old he would actually be in human terms.
Marek Redthorn
Gender: Male
Relationship Status: Widower
Birthdate: Dec. 14th, 1941
Lives in: Ferravale, Mossflower
From: Send Valley, Northlands
Occupation: Owner at Ferravale Tavern (since 2015)
Ambassador of Ferravale (since 2017)
The rest of Marek's Facebook page is left intentionally blank.
Other Info about Marek for RP purposes
1. Marek likes his coffee black, he also brews his own. Although he prefers Tea
2. Marek dislikes Starbucks but is thankful that it keeps the younger generation out of his tavern
3. Marek has a Laptop with Wifi and enjoys Netflix and Candy Crush. He doesn't however have a Smartphone, he prefers older technology over new.
4. Marek has a Neopets account which has been slowly rebuilding in recent years after his last account was frozen due to his previous criminal activities of which he was pardoned by both Scioto and Lorimis.
5. Marek became a Brony after he started watching My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic with Lilymoore. His favorite pony is Rarity because she is polite and orderly like him. He also likes Twilight for much of the same reason.
6. Pokemon Go is strictly prohibited on the grounds of the Ferravale Tavern.